To be honest, writing poem was really hard for me. English is my second language and to write a poem put me in trouble. However, i did it. I wrote a poem in Nepali which is my first language and then translated to English.
So, Please feel free to comment and suggest me .
Management is like a boat,
A vessel one must keep a float.
And if you cannot keep your own crew,
A lonely captain left are you.
So, if you wish to suceed,
Give your crew all they might need.
And lead them out to distant lands,
With a tight ship and a steady hand.
3 comments:
I really really like your poem!!! It is very meaningful and put together very nicely! it rhymes well and the imagery is great! You really know how to write poetry!
It was interesting that you first wrote it in Nepalese! I too would like to hear in your language! it's awesomee!!!
Hey Sudhir,
For a translated poem, nothing got lost in translation. It was really great, and I believe it had a deep meaning. I definitely enjoyed it!
I can't agree any more with my classmates - amazing poem! Just a few lines bring so much meaning!
Also, thank you for reading my blog about McDonald's, i trully did not think anyone will take the time to read the 1000 words requested! Thank you for your attention =)
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